BF142152

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__Subject Matter—5 points out of 20__ You did not cover key elements of assignment--see assignment description again.

__Higher-Order Thinking—5 points out of 20__ : You need to show much more specific examples to demonstrate this higher-order thinking.

__Organization--10 points out of 30__ This reads like a rough draft.

__Format--5 points out of 10__ No references

__Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling--10 points out of 10__

__Readability/Style--10 points out of 10__

Grade: 55/100